{"id":1577,"date":"2021-10-01T11:22:48","date_gmt":"2021-10-01T15:22:48","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.richmond.edu\/writing\/?p=1577"},"modified":"2021-10-01T11:26:20","modified_gmt":"2021-10-01T15:26:20","slug":"metaphor-of-the-month-excoriate","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/2021\/10\/01\/metaphor-of-the-month-excoriate\/","title":{"rendered":"Metaphor of the Month! Excoriate"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/105\/2021\/10\/excoriated-leaves.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1578\" src=\"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/105\/2021\/10\/excoriated-leaves-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"Autumn Trees\" width=\"445\" height=\"334\" srcset=\"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/105\/2021\/10\/excoriated-leaves-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/105\/2021\/10\/excoriated-leaves-1024x769.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/105\/2021\/10\/excoriated-leaves-768x577.jpg 768w, https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/105\/2021\/10\/excoriated-leaves.jpg 1200w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 445px) 100vw, 445px\" \/><\/a>I love his word, though it can be grisly when not used metaphorically.<\/p>\n<p>Dan Strohl, my editor at <a href=\"https:\/\/www.hemmings.com\/stories\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><em>Hemmings Daily,<\/em><\/a> recently pleaded with readers not to excoriate him about a post he made, at least until they read the text. That&#8217;s the old-car hobby for you. You can be skinned alive for suggesting, as Dan did, that modern car batteries can be safely stored on a concrete floor without danger of draining them. He avoided flaying, because he provided good reasons.<\/p>\n<p>So, to our word and a way to employ it metaphorically.<\/p>\n<p>Fall, itself a metaphor. Autumn, if you prefer (as I do). If you are what expert of written style Joseph Glaser calls a &#8220;Creative Genius&#8221; who overwrites everything, you might even say, &#8220;Break, heart! Through yonder window, I swoon with despair as the <a href=\"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/2018\/10\/05\/word-of-the-week-autumnal\/\">autumnal<\/a>, rude winds of Boreas excoriate the fair trees of summer!&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Huh? This latinate term has a gory origin, hence my photo of bare and soon-to-be leafless trees, not flayed carcasses. Because as I learned from <a href=\"https:\/\/www.oed.com\/view\/Entry\/65872?isAdvanced=false&amp;result=2&amp;rskey=WqKg2V&amp;\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">the OED entry<\/a>, our metaphor means to skin something, to flay. Most of us who eat meat buy it pre-skinned.\u00a0 Since the word can mean &#8220;to peel,&#8221; we have a vegan-friendly option, too.<\/p>\n<p>Glaser notes that Latinate terms such as excoriate make writing more formal. Yes, but keep in mind the audience. &#8220;Peel&#8221; would be more accurate for an orange, whereas we&#8217;d save &#8220;excoriate&#8221; for an audience who would get the humor of this drawing-room exaggeration (and you thought we gearheads were all knuckle-draggers). Sniff.<\/p>\n<p>Feel free to excoriate me in comments, or to send words and metaphors to us by e-mail (jessid -at- richmond -dot- edu) or leaving a comment below.<\/p>\n<p>See all of our Metaphors of the Month\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/tag\/metaphor-of-the-month\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">here<\/a>\u00a0and Words of the Week\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/tag\/word-of-the-week\/\">here<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p><em>Creative-Commons image courtesy of <a href=\"https:\/\/pxhere.com\/en\/photo\/1259594\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">pxhere<\/a>.<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I love his word, though it can be grisly when not used metaphorically. Dan Strohl, my editor at Hemmings Daily, recently pleaded with readers not to excoriate him about a post he made, at least until they read the text. That&#8217;s the old-car hobby for you. You can be skinned alive for suggesting, as Dan &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/2021\/10\/01\/metaphor-of-the-month-excoriate\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Metaphor of the Month! Excoriate<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":6904,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[2516,87399,2521,40197],"tags":[87401],"class_list":["post-1577","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-academic-writing","category-metaphor","category-style","category-vocabulary","tag-metaphor-of-the-month"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1577","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/6904"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1577"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1577\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1581,"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1577\/revisions\/1581"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1577"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1577"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/create.richmond.edu\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1577"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}